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Lord of the Flies Final Writing

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Now that we have completed our reading of Lord of the Flies, you will be submitting an analytical essay as your final assessment in lieu of an AP-style prompt. The objective is to reveal your knowledge of how Golding uses archetypes within Lord of the Flies to support the larger theme of the work.

In your essay, you will select a focus character from the following and identify his primary archetypal role in the work:

Ralph
Piggy
Jack
Simon
Roger

A good explanation of archetypal roles may be found here or in this Archetypes and Symbols handout. You may also refer to the Archetype_PowerPoint we referenced in class or consult the handouts on archetypes available on the AP Resources page to provide additional background and clarification.

Your essay should show, using appropriate directly quoted or paraphrased support from the novel, how your selected character develops to fulfill his designated archetypal role within the novel and how that role contributes to the work’s overall theme. You may also include references to other archetypal or symbolic information, such as the use of color, shape, etc. as you build your argument. Direct quotations from Golding should be cited according to MLA guidelines.

Archetypal themes to consider—remember that themes must be stated in a phrase, not as a single word!

Hero (good overcoming evil)
Obstacle (struggle with self, struggle with nature)
Quest
Death and Rebirth
Initiation (coming of age, loss of innocence)
Outcast (alienation, isolation, acceptance of atypical)
Your essay of no more than 750 words (three double-spaced pages) should be submitted to Edmodo by the end of the day Thursday, October 22. You will upload your essay to the posted assignment in .pdf format. Other formats do not permit me to make annotations for your review. See me if you have submission issues. Do this ahead of time so you don’t run into problems on the due date.

 

Good luck, and happy writing!

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Thug Notes: Macbeth

Strange women on moors with cauldrons = bad juju! Salty language and adult themes ahead. Proceed with caution.

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Essay Revision with Highlighters

This revision technique can be very helpful in determining areas of strength and weakness in your AP prompt responses.

You will need four different color highlighters to complete the task. Please mark your response to the “The Black Walnut Tree” prompt as follows:

  • Color 1 – Highlight your thesis statement and the topic sentence of each paragraph.
  • Color 2 – Highlight any specific quotations you have made from the text.
  • Color 3 – Highlight the literary techniques and strategies that Oliver is using in the poem to evoke meaning. In other words, how is Oliver communicating the underlying meaning of the poem with her selected strategies (like imagery, tone, etc.)?
  • Color 4 – Highlight your interpretation of Oliver’s strategies and the meaning they convey. These highlighted lines explain why you derive a particular mood or meaning from the lines or strategies/techniques/language you have chosen (what about the strategy made you think what you did).

After you have finished marking your draft, look for opportunities for improvement. Is one color dominating the essay as a whole? Do you notice a lack of any particular color? Do you need to include more specific evidence from the text? Does your essay need restructuring overall because your thesis only addresses one part of the prompt? Do the topic sentences connect logically with the thesis and provide a logical and coherent flow in your essay? Have you chosen appropriate techniques and strategies to discuss? Are you fully explaining the use of those techniques and how they help to reveal meaning? With answers to these questions in mind, rewrite the essay. Consider what we reviewed in terms of the scoring rubric and plan to create a final version that would bring the score up at least one point from the original draft. If you have been stuck on a score, you should improve and revise to lift this essay out of the rut.

Your completed revision should be stapled to the back of the prompt and in-class draft. You may type it if you wish, but typing is not required. Your revision is due when you come to class Friday, February 6.

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Gender and Media: Video Analysis

 

 

genderAmericans are huge consumers of media, including television shows, films, music, websites, online portals, and social media networks in addition to the advertising that accompanies most of these. What’s often lacking is analysis of these media to determine which messages, both direct and indirect, are being sent. Our perceptions of gender are colored and developed by what we view and hear. With that in mind, you will be conducting a brief analysis of a selected short video for the messages it is sending about the genders.

1. Select a short media example, like a commercial or music video, that you may view online. It may take multiple viewings to complete your analysis.

2. If you select a commercial, record the name of the commercial (if available), the manufacturer and model of the product being sold, and the year of release at the top of the page. If you select a music video, record the artist and title of the song at the top of the page. Include the year of release. You must also paste in the URL for your commercial or video.

3. Write a brief summary (no more than five sentences) of what happens in your media selection.

4. Answer the following questions about your selection:

  • Are there any stereotypes about either gender that are apparent? If so, explain the stereotype and how it is perpetuated.
  • Are there any images that challenge stereotypes?
  • If you were re-doing this advertisement or video, what changes would you make to eliminate the stereotypes?

5. Conclude your analysis by arguing whether your video is a positive, negative, or neutral portrayal of the genders.

Your one page typed analysis is due Friday, December 5.

Here is an example using a famous Super Bowl commercial:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R55e-uHQna0

“The Force,” Volkswagen Passat, 2012.
http:/ /www.youtube.com/watch?v=R55e-uHQna0

A young child wearing a Darth Vader costume attempts to use The Force on a variety of items around his house, including the family dog, a washing machine, a doll, and the sandwich mom is making for lunch. The father arrives home in the VW, and “Darth” tries The Force on the car. To his surprise, The Force works! The car actually starts thanks to a button on the car’s remote.

Stereotypes are present.The doll is sitting on a bed covered with stuffed animals in a room decorated in pink, which are stereotypical girl things. The mother is at home during the day, wearing casual clothes and making a sandwich, the stay at home mom stereotype. The father arrives home from work–he’s wearing a suit and carrying a briefcase–the stereotypical man of the household.

You can’t tell whether the child in the Darth Vader costume is male or female, but it is too easy to assume that a boy is in the costume because the stereotypical husband-wife-two kids family usually has a boy and a girl, and you’ve already seen a doll. There’s no way to tell whether the doll also belongs to Darth.

It would be easy to challenge the stereotypes by changing the doll on the bed to a different kind of toy (maybe a Transformer?) or by having Darth try the force on a toy in a playroom that doesn’t look like a boy’s room or a girl’s room. Dad could make the sandwich while mom comes home from work with the briefcase.

The commercial isn’t negative, but it isn’t positive either. It follows too closely to the stereotypical family roles held by both men and women. Changing the surroundings and the toy that Darth uses The Force on would allow the audience to more easily imagine a child of either gender in the costume.

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Advice for Success: UT Commencement Address

In June of 2014, Admiral William McRaven of the U.S. Navy addressed the graduates of his alma mater, the University of Texas at Austin. In his remarks, he connects his Navy SEAL training with important advice for success in life–steps one can take to change the world.

As you watch the speech, consider the following:

1) What is the topic of the speech?

2) What is the purpose of the speech?

3) What details and examples are effective at establishing the purpose?

After viewing the speech, write a response in which you select the 2-3 traits that you find not only useful, but the most likely to have the desired effect. Explain why you find that trait important and why you think it would be an effective one to adopt if you indeed wish to change the world.

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Thug Notes Introduction

In June 2013, Thug Notes produced its first video to YouTube. Thug Notes introduces classic works of literature with a hip-hop twist. Creators Jared Bauer and Jacob Salamon write the scripts with actor/comedian Greg Edwards hosting each episode as Sparky Sweets, PhD. The aim is to summarize and analyze classic works of literature with a hip-hop twist.

Here’s an example of the Thug Notes style applied to Harper Lee’s To Kill a Mockingbird. I’ll post the Thug Notes version of each work they cover that we read in class, but be warned! Salty language and adult themes ahead. Proceed with caution.

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Thug Notes: Brave New World

Orgy porgy, soma, and centrifugal bumblepuppy? That’s life in the World State streets. Salty language and adult themes ahead. Proceed with caution.

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Thug Notes: The Stranger

Is it hot out here, or is it me? Bang! Bang bang bang bang…oh, well. Salty language and adult themes ahead. Proceed with caution.

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Semester Exam Analysis

ap-exams-aheadEssay Analysis
Select one of your exam essays for analysis. You may mark sentences with letters, or you may color-code with highlighters.

L — (literal) Your thought was stated directly in the text

The Joads are traveling from Oklahoma to California

I — (inference) Your thought was not stated directly in the text, but there is evidence for it. It is hinted at, implied, or suggested.

There is more promise for a better future in California than in Oklahoma or other parts of the country 

C — (critical) Your thought was an original idea, opinion, connection or critical question related to the text.

In appearing to be a promised land, California can be compared to the land of “milk and honey” of the Old Testament

After marking the text, write a short summary/analysis about what you need to do on future essays to improve. You may do this at the end of your selected essay or on the back of your essay total sheet. Submit the whole packet for review (it will be returned).

 

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Thug Notes: Beowulf

Did somebody holler for a hero? Salty language and adult themes ahead. Proceed with caution.

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